A53v3 Contributor Write-Ups

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Re: A53v3 Contributor Write-Ups

Post by tepples » Mon Aug 28, 2017 8:21 pm

Also make sure it's consistently spelled "Action 53" with the space.

* Chris Cacciatore and M-Tee profiles say "A53v3" which isn't defined anywhere.
* Sylvain Gadrat's profile says "Action53" with no space.

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Re: A53v3 Contributor Write-Ups

Post by M_Tee » Mon Aug 28, 2017 9:25 pm


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Re: A53v3 Contributor Write-Ups

Post by RogerBidon » Tue Aug 29, 2017 1:49 pm

I would love to see my screen name with my name: "Sylvain Gadrat aka RogerBidon", like for dustmop and others.

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Re: A53v3 Contributor Write-Ups

Post by cppchriscpp » Tue Aug 29, 2017 2:33 pm

My card is nothing short of perfect - pixellated duck and all! :D

I skimmed the rest of the entries and didn't see anything glaring. Nicely done.

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Re: A53v3 Contributor Write-Ups

Post by dullahan » Tue Aug 29, 2017 4:20 pm

Looks good! Wondering if there is a better wording for the last sentence for Nebs n' Debs since it makes it sound like Kulor joined after the competition when he was actually a part of it.

My brain isn't working atm, so I can't think of an alternate wording....

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Re: A53v3 Contributor Write-Ups

Post by M_Tee » Tue Aug 29, 2017 9:10 pm

@RogerBidon
I wasn't sure who all to include the alias for. I tried to make a judgment call based on my knowledge of folks' web presence. I changed yours, and I'll gladly change anyone else's –to include or remove their alias.

Re: Nebs n Debs' Writeup
That's the impression I got from the write-up as well. Now that I checked the blurb.txt, I see that it isn't the case. I've since taken the liberty of rewording it. See if this is better.

I also consistently capitalized Twitter throughout (I think, no ctrl+F on Illustrator to quick check), and tried to improve consistency with the proper nouns that I chose to bold (game titles, non-personal development or publishing entities).

First Row
Second Row
Third Row
Fourth Row
Fifth Row

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