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 Post subject: Forest Scene (WIP)
PostPosted: Tue Sep 04, 2018 2:52 pm 
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I'm working on a forest scene. I've only got the dirt tiles made so far, but I'm sharing it because I'd like some feedback.
Please critique it openly; I welcome all feedback. Tell me what's wrong; make me cry.
I already see dozens of errors, but I've been staring at it too long so I can't tell what are the ones other people are going to notice too.

I'm going for something about the capabilities of the SNES. I'm not actually counting the tiles, but I'm trying to keep the tile-count down, and I've been constricting them to 8x8 tiles in 16x16 chunks.

Main character sprite included.
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 Post subject: Re: Forest Scene (WIP)
PostPosted: Tue Sep 04, 2018 5:02 pm 
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It looks acceptable, but if you want criticism I think the color gradients can be balanced a little more. Some shades are too close or too far from eachother.


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 Post subject: Re: Forest Scene (WIP)
PostPosted: Tue Sep 04, 2018 7:13 pm 
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Those trees are beautiful and very realistic :) ,seriously though I wish I could pixel like that,looks good to me.


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 Post subject: Re: Forest Scene (WIP)
PostPosted: Tue Sep 04, 2018 7:53 pm 
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Looking good so far.

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 Post subject: Re: Forest Scene (WIP)
PostPosted: Wed Oct 03, 2018 5:55 pm 
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So I already knew I wasn't going to have much time these last couple weeks, so I decided to make some water instead of starting on the trees.

Here's a sample with a water tile:
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And here it is a detail with the water animated:
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It uses three frames, but they are offset which makes the animation six frames long.

By the way, while this is a work-in-progress, I would appreciate it if you critiqued the art as if it were a finished product; (barring the obvious placeholder elements of course,) because I'm generally not planning on going back and revising any of this if nobody seems to notice any flaws.


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 Post subject: Re: Forest Scene (WIP)
PostPosted: Wed Oct 03, 2018 6:15 pm 
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That water animation looks a little too... bouncy. Not enough of an artist to suggest a fix, other than slowing it down a bit.

The ground tiles are also awfully sharp, and could use a bit of rounding like the background tiles, if that's possible in your setup.


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 Post subject: Re: Forest Scene (WIP)
PostPosted: Thu Oct 04, 2018 1:40 am 
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Yes, the water is far too fast. It looks like a rapid killer stream.


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 Post subject: Re: Forest Scene (WIP)
PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2019 8:36 am 
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Uhg, it's taken me three months but I'm finally able to work on this again.
Here's some trees, or at least some bark.

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 Post subject: Re: Forest Scene (WIP)
PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2019 10:33 am 
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Feels a bit more glossy than trees ever are (with the exception of birch, which has a very distinctive and different pattern)


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 Post subject: Re: Forest Scene (WIP)
PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2019 12:17 pm 
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The colors are a bit boring. If you must use the same palette for trees and ground, maybe it would help to use fewer bright pixels for trees, to get some more contrast between trees and ground.


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 Post subject: Re: Forest Scene (WIP)
PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2019 4:25 pm 
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nocash wrote:
The colors are a bit boring. If you must use the same palette for trees and ground, maybe it would help to use fewer bright pixels for trees, to get some more contrast between trees and ground.

The trees are a different color from the ground, but yeah, they look very similar.
The colors aren't really meant to be final yet; I want to get all the elements in so I can see how well the colors all work with each other before I start tweaking the palette. But I will bear your comment in mind when I get to that point.


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 Post subject: Re: Forest Scene (WIP)
PostPosted: Tue Jan 15, 2019 7:02 pm 
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I would also agree on what lidnariq has said, it looks a bit too perfect, more like a bark-less machine-cut table leg from ikea, not so much like a tree in the wild. Concerning the shape, your old sketch looked more natural and realistic : )

Doing an image search for tree+drawing and for tree+pixel art... detailed bark is often omitted, some tree drawings look more like twisted ropes, or have only some shadow and texture here and there, eg. only on one side of the tree.


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